« Serious editing needed. Length should be cut (at least by 75%) — the text updates are a hot idea, it’d be even hotter if he verbally supplied them out loud for us (even as a voiceover after the fact), & finally; why are his balls completely obscured by a literal birds nest of hair? You never get to see his balls once because the hedges are so overgrown!»
« Serious editing needed. Length should be cut (at least by 75%) — the text updates are a hot idea, it’d be even hotter if he verbally supplied them out loud for us (even as a voiceover after the fact), & finally; why are his balls completely obscured by a literal birds nest of hair? You never get to see his balls once because the hedges are so overgrown!»